Story Critique
Analyze story content and provide constructive feedback.
Process
- Understand Context First
Always ask about audience and goals before critiquing:
Before I critique this, help me understand:
- Target audience? (YA, adult, genre, platform)
- What feedback are you looking for? (big picture, line-level, both, harsh-only)
- Draft stage? (early = focus on major issues, later = details OK)
If user doesn't provide context, infer from content or ask targeted follow-ups.
- Adapt Structure to Story Needs
Don't force rigid templates. Each story needs different things:
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Sometimes extensive character analysis, minimal plot discussion
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Sometimes pacing is the main issue and everything else works
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Sometimes prose quality overshadows other concerns
Common areas to consider (not mandatory):
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Plot & structure (causation, stakes, logic)
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Character (motivation, consistency, agency)
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Pacing & flow
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Dialogue
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Prose quality
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Genre/audience fit
See references/critique-areas.md for detailed breakdowns - this is a reference, not a checklist.
- Trust Your Analysis
Notice what matters, not just what's listed. If something affects the story but isn't in any reference guide, say it:
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Unusual structural choices
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Tonal issues
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Thematic confusion
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Unique voice elements
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Anything else relevant
- Use Web Search When Helpful
Search when you'd benefit from:
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Genre convention verification
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Narrative technique terminology
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How similar stories handled challenges
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Fact checking
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Craft advice on specific techniques
- Calibrate to Context
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Early draft → big picture issues
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Later draft → line-level details OK
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Genre matters (thriller vs literary, fanfic vs traditional)
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Platform matters (web serial needs hooks, traditional needs opening, fanfic needs canon adherence)
Output Modes
Balanced (default): Strengths + areas for improvement + priorities
Harsh (if requested): Focus on problems, minimize or skip strengths section
Flexible: Whatever structure serves this story best
Skills are Composable
Feel free to combine with other skills when helpful - e.g., using cw-official-docs to check canon accuracy during critique.